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04:30 pm: How to let your protagonist make mistakes

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From:(Anonymous)
Date:May 20th, 2009 04:56 pm (UTC)
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Just from the summary, I'd say it sounds believable, but I'd have to see it written out to know for sure - it would certainly be possible with that plot to either beat the characters over the head with ignored hints, or have them suddenly realize something with no apparent lead-up. Especially since you haven't said yet how they'll go from 'spirit trying to ressurect master' to what it actually is.
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