(Anonymous) @ : Very good
That made for some very good writing. The only criticism I have is that you might want to make some of your paragraphs a little thicker - at least for me, it becomes hard to read consecutive pages of dozens of tiny paragraphs. Weird criticism, I know.
That made for some very good writing. The only criticism I have is that you might want to make some of your paragraphs a little thicker - at least for me, it becomes hard to read consecutive pages of dozens of tiny paragraphs. Weird criticism, I know.