Limyaael

(Anonymous) @ 03:18 am: Very good
That made for some very good writing. The only criticism I have is that you might want to make some of your paragraphs a little thicker - at least for me, it becomes hard to read consecutive pages of dozens of tiny paragraphs. Weird criticism, I know.

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